Year 5 Poetry
This week year 5 have been looking at Pie Corbett poems and were asked to add an extra verse to his poem 'Imagine'. The children were using personification, alliteration and similes to make their verses fantastic! Samuel went the extra mile and wrote his own poem based on Pie Corbett's and here it is:
The trees and the grass
as you are lying down
you look around for a house
you are in a desert with cacti everywhere
as you are looking for an oasis to drink out of
on an island stranded
hoping for life form and materials for a boat
on the roaring ocean
as you float on the drumming boat
you are finally at your happy home
as you trundle towards it
after a long day out
you’re finally lying in your bed that’s calling to you.
Well done Samuel, this is brilliant!